tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8293484.post8026871944584470340..comments2024-03-28T22:25:39.706-06:00Comments on The Michael Bane Blog: An Excerpt from FIVE TO GO...Michael Banehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16630187848984050478noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8293484.post-87258337960704440012009-03-06T21:21:00.000-07:002009-03-06T21:21:00.000-07:00That is some of the most natural-sounded writing a...That is some of the most natural-sounded writing and dialogue I've ever read. I was only half-awake and thought I was reading an excerpt from a well-written blog post. It's rare to see that level of prose naturalness.Dave S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/05940509831649020252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8293484.post-55468252799885024022009-03-06T10:18:00.000-07:002009-03-06T10:18:00.000-07:00AAAARGH! He's just doing this to torture us.AAAARGH! He's just doing this to torture us.Hecatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10334937938185561628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8293484.post-89272992111185391802009-03-06T09:08:00.000-07:002009-03-06T09:08:00.000-07:00Raw copy...spelling doesn't get fixed until the bo...Raw copy...spelling doesn't get fixed until the book goes into my first edit...<BR/><BR/>mbMichael Banehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16630187848984050478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8293484.post-28157681645235074752009-03-06T08:14:00.000-07:002009-03-06T08:14:00.000-07:00SOON!SOON!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8293484.post-5897518423094500472009-03-06T08:11:00.000-07:002009-03-06T08:11:00.000-07:00"...the look of absent distain of long-expatriated..."...the look of absent distain of long-expatriated Russian royalty. They took two graceful steps to flank the suit I didn’t know, then went still, four blue eyes flickering back and forth, scanning like the velociraptors in Jurassic Park."<BR/><BR/>Nice!<BR/><BR/>Fix the spelling of "disdain", though.Dave S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/05940509831649020252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8293484.post-30457202025153030802009-03-05T19:06:00.000-07:002009-03-05T19:06:00.000-07:00Git-er-done!!!Git-er-done!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com